Hey! I thought this was pretty cool and am definitely going to be keeping tabs on it :) the atmosphere is really good and I love that it asks more original questions. The face distortion part was what REALLY got to me :o
If I had one critique, it would be the language. I'm assuming English is not your native language; and there's nothing wrong with that! It's perfectly good for 90% of it, but there are a couple of errors that can take you out of the atmosphere a little. I recommend for the full game you get someone to proofread the script for you just to make sure it's all well and good :O
Other than that, I am VERY interested in seeing where this goes!! :D
hi first of all, thank you very much for playing it. and yes, unfortunately, English is not really my native language, they caught me. I still hope that you can read this message here without any errors. I’m very grateful to you for playing it. and clearly criticism is the most important thing I will definitely get the best out of it and try to implement your tips. at the general assembly I’m already working on it shouldn’t have to take long then the complete game will come out. Thanks alot
I can understand you just fine, it's really only minor mistakes that can distract people a little bit! Thanks for replying, I'm excited to play the full version!!! :)
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Hey! I thought this was pretty cool and am definitely going to be keeping tabs on it :) the atmosphere is really good and I love that it asks more original questions. The face distortion part was what REALLY got to me :o
If I had one critique, it would be the language. I'm assuming English is not your native language; and there's nothing wrong with that! It's perfectly good for 90% of it, but there are a couple of errors that can take you out of the atmosphere a little. I recommend for the full game you get someone to proofread the script for you just to make sure it's all well and good :O
Other than that, I am VERY interested in seeing where this goes!! :D
hi first of all, thank you very much for playing it. and yes, unfortunately, English is not really my native language, they caught me. I still hope that you can read this message here without any errors. I’m very grateful to you for playing it. and clearly criticism is the most important thing I will definitely get the best out of it and try to implement your tips. at the general assembly I’m already working on it shouldn’t have to take long then the complete game will come out. Thanks alot
I can understand you just fine, it's really only minor mistakes that can distract people a little bit! Thanks for replying, I'm excited to play the full version!!! :)
In any case stay tuned. shouldn’t take long then I’ll be done with the first full version. And thank you again for the great feedback